1. Chapter 1 (1/1)

so a looong time ago i wrote a maximum ride story.

note: i say a long time ago, meaning my writing was mad terrible and it gets all mary sue and... yeah. it's so embarrassing. -.-

but i found some bloopers with my characters, or what i think are bloopers, and i think it'd be interesting if i show you guys some of them. to start off... i have 5 characters.

zera (17 y.o.); who is a wolf hy

id, grey wolf to be specific. she's quiet and likes to keep to herself, and she's mean to strangers, but when she opens up to them she'll become loyal and honest. she has a great sense of smell and hearing, she can listen up to 40 meters (131 feet) with her wolf ears which are on her head, if she chooses to and has a speed up to 97 mph. the flock pays attention to her ears and tail a lot and rely on them the most.

hunter (16 y.o.); hunter's also a wolf hy

id, same abilities as zera, but has

own fur. he and zera have a strong bond and are always close to each other when they have the chance. hunter is always nice to people, welcoming them and trying to get a friendship starting.

tiger (16 y.o.); they call him tiger because he's part tiger. he has a tail and ears, abilities just like the wolves. but, you know, tiger ears and tail. he can also see in the dark. tiger is a huge flirt and is always ready to meet the ladies. he's a show off but he knows his limits. surprisingly, he's not one of those jerks out there. he's super nice and sensitive, and very loyal.

oscar (16 y.o.); oscar is tiger's best friend. he is too a flirt, and he's really funny. he's crazy about justice and he has the ability to make someone say what he wants to hear, and to make someone do what's right. he believes america loves him, because, well, he's 2% eagle. his wingspan is 5 meters (17 feet) and most of the time during dangerous missions he stands behind everyone and spreads his wings out to full length so he can cover everyone up.

dale (5 y.o.); the youngest of the group. dale is very emotional and her sticks close to hunter and zera. he has the dna of a cat and so any sharp noise will send him climbing up the wall. crying. he can sense danger, whether it be someone about to step on a bug or a bomb coming his way. dale has the curiosity like nobody else, and he has a passion for eating rat.

i also have 2 characters, but they're not really important. mary, who is a wolf hy

id, and darla, also a wolf hy

id. they're good friends of zera's and live in a crummy apartment in new york... and that's all... enjoy...!