4. Complicated (1/2)

a/n: sorry that i took so long, too much skool work. but today'[s a teachers training day so i have some time to finish off this chapter. i have a new idea for a fic in all, quite a few actually, but anyways.

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snowblossoms: so you like murex...i'll keep him active in the fic them ;) and fluff..oh its coming...think i'll add some to this chapter actually. heheehe.and hitomi.......mwahahahaa! she's here :)

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mhavesheart: thanks for the review. erm...yeeah, about my writing style. it's not really about enlish lang, in the literal sense. i mean i do write in proper english, but i also write how the character is feeling or seeing things. sorry if that doesn't make sense to you. i know my writing style's wierd, i'll try and get deeper...? not to sure you need to be more specific. yeah i realise that some sentences are to long, but as you can see its a part of my writing style, it adds effect. oki doki's thanks for the suggestions tho.

disclaimer: me no owney nada. lo siento, you can't sue me!!!!!!!! hey! do 16 year olds have lawyers. i wanted to be a lawyer...now i wanna be a....sorri..o.o

hidden treasures

chapter 4

complicated

by atari

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she froze...something was

wrong...

air...

eath...

hard..

eathing was becoming a harder task to perform by the second...her hands instinctively flew too her neck, she found that strong hands were already clasped around it, but they were intent on the opposite task her own hands had deemed to perform, suddenly out of a hazy mist a face appeared in-front of her. his eyes, they were blue almost like the sky on a cloudless day...these eyes were cold, like ice, his face, long, slender, beautiful and his hair

...his golden hair, it looked like silk to touch

...his voice...

"well what do we have here?"

...cut like a knife made from ice-caps.

the mirage that was the former beauty disintegrated before her eyes, along with her control over her body. coming to a realisation that she was still on the ship, her neck was released but only for her left arm to be captivated...the young girl found herself being dragged along...destination unknown...

it was then that she realised that what she had just experienced was that of a dream, or maybe a vision of what was to come...or had already passed

she was dragged outside, she dint struggle, she'd learnt from past experience that when the power overtaking you is stronger than that of your own, it was best to give in. the pain was unbearable yes, but she didn't scream...she did feel faint, she felt as if she could just give in completely...then it all stopped. the rapid movement through corridors and random doors, the pain in her legs...head...arms...feet

...all stopped.

but nausea arrived to take their place and was on a rapid increase as her eyes registered corpses of those she once knew...or did not know, their blood flowing into one stream on the deck, dampening her feet.

a high pitched scream or pure terror ran through the air, sending a chill down the spines of men who cold still hear.

her stomach was constantly overturning forcing her to bend over convulsing, almost retching. never had she seen so much blood and death in her life since...no, she didn't want to think of that right now. the past is the past, never re-live the past.

the bastard who had mercilessly dragged her into this hell merely smiled at her fear.

"you're next my dear, don't worry they didn't feel a thing."

'oh god's what's going to happen to me, what did i do to deserve this, was it the wrongs of my forefathers, or maybe their own forefathers, whatever it was, please forgive them, i don't want to die, not like this, let me live...'

her silent prayers came to an a

upt end as she caught onto two new voices in conversation at the far side of the deck.

~*~*

"van, van, van." the name repeatedly left his mouth in mock disappointment. "how long has it been?"

"too long azuri, too long." his tone matched the sarcasm of azuri's, his challenger. he raised he sword slowly. "shall we pick up where we left off?" his eyes were cold and held no emotion...nothing different there, but the woman watching had no clue of this, and it scared her.

azuri smiled, a smile that matched van's eyes. "shall we, but before you run into your death, tell me van, how did this dispute of ours start? my memory is slightly hazy these days." his question dripped with sarcasm but van still chose to answer.

"you killed my

other." still no emotion, his answer was a matter of fact, as if he couldn't care less anymore.

azuri fake gasped, slapping his head with his free arm. "ah yes! now i remember, that fool...you don't sound like you care though."

"i don't."

"then why continue, not that i object to killing you painfully."