1. Not to do part 1 (1/1)

disclaimer: um…last time i checked i wasn't a man, so…i'm not james patterson and i don't own maximum ride.

nothing written should be taken personally, what is written is only my opinion only.

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things you should not do when writing a maximum ride fanfic!

1.unless you have a

illiant reason why, don't make angel evil. (angel turning evil because she couldn't be leader, in my opinion, is not a

illiant reason)

2.please, please, please, if you have an oneshot that has over 3 000 word plus a lot of spaces, split it into chapters. there is a higher chance of me reading a fanfic that has 20 chapters than one that is an oneshot and has 3 000 words.

3.please don't make 50 ari(s). if he dies, make an ari 2 if you want. but after that stop!

4.unless you have clearly said that ari and max aren't related. don't make them marry each other.

5.if you have forgotten about total, don't add him in half way through the story! it's just scary!

6.don't make max pregnant. i mean. how many winged kids, that are on the run and carrying a baby have you seen?hello! max is only 14! max wouldn't be that stupid. it's alright if max is 25 or something.

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what do you think?

it's very short.

review please?