3. Not to do part 3 (1/1)

disclaimer: excuse me… i only learned how to spell james patterson's surname last week so how could i be him?

yay…my mum finally let me buy twilight. i love the book. though i still think maximum ride is better. if you disagree with me check out my poll on my profile.

i've got over 200 hits but only 28 reviews! please review.

i'm so embarrassed, i didn't read through the last page till after posting so i never saw the spelling mistake.

i think i have to say this again, what i write on here is my opinian only!

these people gave me ideas on what to put on this page, so thanks to: shaman of the wolves, eternal thief, ... (i used this person's idea on the last page), if i missed you out or if you want me to add your idea on here tell me.

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what you should not do when writing a maximum ride fanfic part 3

1.please don't introduce twenty new characters in the story. five is alright but any more gets confusing in the end.

2.hy

ids! they are what practically make maximum ride unique. they are also really cool to play around with. but you need to use some sense. a cat-fish hy

id wouldn't survive that long. also hy

ids that are err… very unique get really annoying and are very far-fetched.

3.stories where max and the flock get phones and start texting each other are hilarious. only problem is, iggy is blind! how does he read the screen? unless he's got his sight back he can't really reply.

4.in my opinion, some pairings are wrong. very wrong! think about it, is fang-ari realistic? i won't list some of the other pairings that i think are wrong because you'd probably want to kill me. just remember, be realistic!

5.switching povs. yes, i know you want to write about how other characters feel but tell us when you switch the pov. you need to tell us when your switching povs. i've read a lot of fanfics where it has suddenly been switched to fang's pov without saying. it's annoying, especially if it happens during when max and fang are kissing, i get so freaked out when it's in max's pov and it suddenly says 'her warm lips over mine'.

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help!

i can't think of anything!

review and tell me what i should write.